PRIMER BROJ 1

EXAMPLE NO 1

Predsedniku Upravnog Odbora,
Serbian Ortodox Church,
"Saint Nicolas",
243-247 Vulture Street,
South Brisbane, QLD, 4101, AUSTRALIA

tel: (07) 3844 3092

Postovani Predsednice,

Pisem Vam u vezi problema nedostatka rekvizita i opreme za decu u vasoj opstini.

Iako uzivam posecujuci vasu dobro organziovanu opstinu, vrlo cesto imam problema sa svoja dva deteta(3 i 4 godina) na imanju jer nemaju cime da se zabave.

U tom smislu, ja bih Vas zamolio da postavite dodatne rekvizite za malu decu, kao sto su ljuljaske, klackalice, tobogane i slicno, i sto je najvaznije ogradite tako da deca ne mogu da  izadju bez pomoc roditelja.

Kao dobar primer, mogao bi da bude bilo koji restoran Mek Donaldsa sa pomenutim rekvizitima.

Postavljanjem ovih rekvizita Vi bi ste povecali uzivanje dece i roditelja, a samim tim i ucestanost posete.

Potpuno mi je jasno da moji zahtevi zahtevaju dosta ulaganja, ali mislim da sa malo planiranja i organizovanje neke dobrotvorne akcije ovaj problem moze lako da se resi.

Srdacan pozdrav,

Zoran Smith.

Date: 09/Juli/99         Mr Zoran Smith,
                                   23 Hope St,
                                   Brisbane, 4000.
                                   tel: (07) 12345678

The Management Board President,
Serbian Ortodox Church,
"Saint Nicolas",
243-247 Vulture Street,
South Brisbane, QLD, 4101, AUSTRALIA

tel: (07) 3844 3092

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you with respect to lack of children requisites and playing equipment at  your property.

Although I am enjoying at your well organized  property, very often I have problems with my two children(3 and 4 years old), because they don't have any playing equipment to play with.

In relation to that,  I would kindly ask you to fit additional playing equipment, such as swings, sea-saw, slides etc., and what is the most important to put a fence around, so the children cannot get out without parent's help.

As a good example, it could be any McDonalds restaurant with the mentioned playing equipment.

By adding the mentioned equipment, you would increase the children's' and parents' enjoyment and therefore frequency of people visits.

I understand that my requests require a considerable investment, but I believe that with a minor planning and some charity organization, this problem could be overcomed easily.

Yours sincerely,

Zoran Smith

PRIMER BROJ 2

EXAMPLE NO 2

Datum: 09/Dec/99      Mr John Petrovic,
                                   17 King Rd,
                                   Red Hill, 4000.
                                   tel: (07) 82637463

Predsedniku Upravnog Odbora,
Serbian Ortodox Church,
"Saint Nicolas",
243-247 Vulture Street,
South Brisbane, QLD, 4101, AUSTRALIA

tel: (07) 3844 3092

Postovani predsednice,

Pisem Vam u vezi problema cistoce klozeta u vreme odrzavanje rok-koncerta dana 23/Novembra/99.

Kao redovan posetioc vaseg imanja i zabava, navedeno dana bio sam duboko razocaran stanjem klozeta, koji je do sada uvek bio perfektno osvetljen i cist.

Tog pomenutog dana, cini mi se da nista nije funkcionisalo kako treba. Deo neonskog osvetljenje bilo je pregorelo, sapuna nije bilo dovoljno kao i samo stanje klozeta nije bilo na zadovoljavajucem nivou. Otuda, vas klozet, koji je bio do sada uvek blistavo osvetljen i cist, licio je na neki zapusteni Balkanski klozet, sto smatram da je nedopustivo za visok renome koji ima vasa opstina.

Nadam se da cete ubuduce bolje kontrolisati sve objekte na vasem imanju, u vreme odrzavanje koncerata gde se skuplja veliki broj mladih jer cistoca i organizovanost je ono sto me najvise privlaci u vasu opstinu.

Srdacan pozdrav,

John Petrovic

The President of the Management Board,
Serbian Ortodox Church,
"Saint Nicolas",
243-247 Vulture Street,
South Brisbane, QLD, 4101, AUSTRALIA

tel: (07) 3844 3092

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you with respect to toilet problem during rock concert, held on 23/Nov/99.

As a regular visitor of your property and enertiments, I was disappointed with toilet condition on the mentioned day, which always looked perfectly clean and bright before.

On the mentioned day, nothing was functioning properly. Part of of fluorescent light was not working, the soap was lacking and the toilet condition was in an unsatisfied condition. Hence your toilet, which was always perfectly clean and bright, looked as a Balkan toilet which is unacceptable for your high reputation.

I hope you will better control all object in the future, especially in during rock concerts time, where you can see a lot of young people, because the your organization and clean is that what attracts me the most to your property.

Yours sincerely,

John Petrovic.